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Similes and Metaphors

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Similes and Metaphors
Story scene

Story

The Lighthouse Library

A storm taps at the windows while shelves of adventure stories glow in the lamplight.

A young writer is trying to make a sea scene feel alive. Your job is to choose images that help the reader see and feel the moment.

Character
Plain description tells us what is there. Figurative language lets the reader picture it.
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Core Concept

How comparisons create pictures

Similes use like or as

A simile compares one thing with another using like or as. In ‘the torch shone like a tiny sun’, the writer is not saying the torch is really a sun. The comparison helps us imagine its brightness. Good similes make an ordinary detail easier to see, hear, or feel.
Similes use like or as

Metaphors make the comparison direct

A metaphor says one thing is another. ‘The classroom was a beehive’ suggests it was busy, noisy, and full of movement. Metaphors often feel stronger than similes because they remove the words like and as.
Metaphors make the comparison direct

Choose an image that fits the mood

The best comparison is not always the most dramatic one. It should fit the mood of the sentence. A stormy sea might be ‘a roaring giant’, while a calm sea might be ‘a sheet of glass’. Before choosing a simile or metaphor, ask: what feeling do I want the reader to have?
Choose an image that fits the mood

Explain the effect, not just the label

In 11+ questions, you may be asked what a phrase suggests. Do not stop at ‘it is a simile’ or ‘it is a metaphor’. Explain the effect: ‘the writer compares the hallway to a river, so we imagine a moving crowd that flows quickly and continuously.’
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Guided Practice

Spot the comparison

Work through each question carefully. Take your time.

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Independent Practice

Write a vivid description

Now it's your turn. Apply what you've learned on your own.

Prompt

Write 5-7 sentences describing a stormy sea outside the Lighthouse Library. Include at least one simile, one metaphor, and one sentence explaining the mood you wanted to create.

60+ words (0)≤160 words (0)2+ adjectives (0)1+ adverbs (0)1+ simile (0)1+ metaphor (0)Avoid: very, really
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Recap

Remember

Similes compare using like or as. Metaphors make a direct comparison. Strong writers choose comparisons that match the mood, then explain the effect on the reader.

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